I learned a great deal writing my first novel and I've learned even more writing the Nifaran Chronicles (coming soon) so I decided to edit the 2nd edition of my first novel.
The new edit fixes some grammatical faux pas but also addresses many issues I've only become aware of recently - most of those stemming from the male gaze and writing characters of colour as a middle-aged white man. I'm not going to pretend I've got everything right, but I'm certainly going to try a lot harder going forward.
The 2nd edition is now available from Amazon as an e-book and a paperback (my first). I'm also hoping to release a hardcover soon.
Please let me know what you think, either here or on Twitter
